(二)引入內(nèi)容1、播放幻燈片,從名言引出思考,什么是文化,如何理解文化?學(xué)生探究,既可質(zhì)疑,也可談自己對文化的理解2、幻燈片,以三組幻燈,分三個(gè)階段,學(xué)生分別通過小組討論的形式,歸納總結(jié)文化現(xiàn)象的三個(gè)特征3、根據(jù)對文化現(xiàn)象的認(rèn)識(shí),歸納總結(jié)文化的內(nèi)涵及外延小活動(dòng):把不是文化的山、水、樹,由幾組同學(xué)畫出來,體會(huì)文化的含義4、一組判斷題,哪些是文化的,哪些不是5、理解文化的特點(diǎn)首先,根據(jù)前面,總結(jié)文化現(xiàn)象的特征,歸納出文化的普通性及特殊性其次,播放視頻,歸納總結(jié)文化是人類特有的現(xiàn)象第三,根據(jù)教材材料,小組探究總結(jié),文化是后天習(xí)得的第四,借助小活動(dòng)的材料,歸納,文化需要一定的物質(zhì)載體6、文化的作用首先、觀看視頻,小組探究總結(jié),文化對于人的影響其次,觀看視頻,小組探究總結(jié),文化對社會(huì)的影響
一、 教材分析1、地位和作用《文化創(chuàng)新的途徑》是人教版教材高二政治必修3第二單元第五課第二個(gè)框題內(nèi)容,本課是對全面兩課的一個(gè)提升,同時(shí)對接下來學(xué)習(xí)第三、四單元的知識(shí)具有指導(dǎo)作用。文化創(chuàng)新是一個(gè)社會(huì)熱點(diǎn),具有很強(qiáng)的思想理論性和探索實(shí)踐性。在前面兩課中,學(xué)生基本明確了文化的交流、傳播和發(fā)展;也明白了文化的繼承和發(fā)展需要?jiǎng)?chuàng)新。而怎樣進(jìn)行創(chuàng)新是本節(jié)課探討的內(nèi)容,也是本單元的重點(diǎn)、難點(diǎn)和落腳點(diǎn)。2、教學(xué)目標(biāo)(1)知識(shí)與能力目標(biāo):①識(shí)計(jì)文化創(chuàng)新的途徑;理解文化創(chuàng)新過程中要認(rèn)識(shí)和處理好兩對基本關(guān)系:當(dāng)代文化與傳統(tǒng)文化、民族文化和外來文化的關(guān)系;②使學(xué)生初步具備認(rèn)識(shí)和處理當(dāng)代文化與傳統(tǒng)文化、民族文化與外來文化關(guān)系的能力;使學(xué)生具備在合作、探究中體驗(yàn)生活、生成認(rèn)識(shí)、構(gòu)建知識(shí)的能力。
3、文化的力量。為了使學(xué)生能辨證地分析文化的力量,我設(shè)計(jì)了兩個(gè)問題進(jìn)行探討:(1)是不是任何文化都能起促進(jìn)作用?(2)你在聽或唱國歌時(shí)感受到一種什么樣的力量?這樣,學(xué)生在對比中學(xué)會(huì)辨證地分析文化的力量——先進(jìn)的、健康的文化能促進(jìn)社會(huì)發(fā)展和個(gè)人成長;落后的、腐朽的文化則阻礙社會(huì)發(fā)展和個(gè)人成長。同時(shí)還能提高學(xué)生的文化賞析能力,從而引導(dǎo)學(xué)生裝自覺參加健康有益的文化活動(dòng),抵制不良文化的影響,投身到社會(huì)主義精神文明建設(shè)中去。關(guān)于課堂練習(xí),我準(zhǔn)備了5個(gè)針對性比較強(qiáng)的選擇題,從而加深鞏固本框題的重難點(diǎn)知識(shí)。最后,播放歌曲《走進(jìn)新時(shí)代》,展示本課知識(shí)結(jié)構(gòu),指出本框題需重點(diǎn)掌握的問題,結(jié)束本課教學(xué)。課后作業(yè),我設(shè)計(jì)了這樣一個(gè)辨析的題目:文化是人們創(chuàng)造的全部財(cái)富的總和,它是人類特有的現(xiàn)象。
二、說學(xué)情學(xué)生狀況:當(dāng)代中學(xué)生在科學(xué)不斷進(jìn)步,文化不斷發(fā)展,社會(huì)不斷變革的今天,雖然能很快適應(yīng)現(xiàn)代社會(huì)生活,但他們的心理還不夠成熟,在情緒特征上表現(xiàn)為好沖動(dòng)、不穩(wěn)定、極端化等特點(diǎn)。對自己的不良情緒表現(xiàn)缺乏深刻地認(rèn)識(shí),也不善于調(diào)適自己的情緒。而且高一學(xué)生正處于人生的重要關(guān)口,已經(jīng)有較強(qiáng)的獨(dú)立意識(shí),但是自控能力和心理調(diào)節(jié)能力還比較薄弱,又處于發(fā)展的不完全成熟時(shí)期,形成了他們內(nèi)心需要與意志調(diào)控能力之間的失調(diào),從而導(dǎo)致他們在處理很多學(xué)習(xí)和生活中的問題時(shí)沖動(dòng)、極端化,難以很好的調(diào)適自己的情緒。
當(dāng)代社會(huì)生活的變化比以往任何時(shí)代都要快。語言尤其是詞匯記錄了這些發(fā)展變化,因而也涌現(xiàn)了大量的新詞新語。據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì),近幾年每年大約要出現(xiàn)1000個(gè)左右的新詞新語,而字典、詞典的多次修訂、增補(bǔ)就反映了這種情況。但相對來說,也有一些流行語又逐漸受到冷遇,甚至退隱。為了更好的對新詞新語與流行文化作一番檢視與探究,那讓我們考察一下它們是怎么產(chǎn)生的吧?老師先給同學(xué)們列舉四種途徑:大屏幕3。同學(xué)們能再舉出以上途徑的一些例子嗎?老師列舉(4)其實(shí)不只這些,那還有哪些途徑呢?找同學(xué)說并舉例。說的非常好,請同學(xué)們看老師的例子,總結(jié)(5)。從新詞新語的產(chǎn)生途徑可以看出,這些鮮活得像畫一樣的新詞就是這個(gè)時(shí)代跳動(dòng)的血小板,它涉及當(dāng)代社會(huì)的重大事件、現(xiàn)象與時(shí)弊,以及人們?nèi)粘I畹母鱾€(gè)層面如人生意義、生活方式、愛情、友情、就業(yè)、消費(fèi)、時(shí)尚等,時(shí)代性強(qiáng),傳播面廣,反映著當(dāng)代社會(huì)時(shí)局與人們文化心態(tài)的變化。
教學(xué)過程:(一)導(dǎo)入:課前放《愛的奉獻(xiàn)》歌曲,同時(shí)不斷播放一些有關(guān)“愛”的主題的圖片,渲染一種情感氛圍。師說:同學(xué)們,誰能說說這組圖片的主題應(yīng)該是什么?生(七嘴八舌):母愛,不對是親情……是友情、還有人與人互相幫助……那組軍人圖片是說保衛(wèi)國家,應(yīng)該是愛國……那徐本禹和感動(dòng)中國呢?…………生答:是關(guān)于愛的方面師說:不錯(cuò),是關(guān)于愛的方面。那么同學(xué)們,今天就以“愛的奉獻(xiàn)”為話題,來寫一篇議論文如何?生答:老師,還是寫記敘文吧。生答:就是,要不議論文寫出來也象記敘文。師問:為什么?生答:老師,這個(gè)話題太有話說了,一舉例子就收不住了,怎么看怎么象記敘文。生答:就是,再用一點(diǎn)形容詞,就更象了。眾人樂。師說:那么同學(xué)們誰能告訴我,為什么會(huì)出現(xiàn)這種問題?一生小聲說:還不是我們笨,不會(huì)寫。師說:不是笨,也不是不會(huì)寫,你們想為什么記敘文就會(huì)寫,一到議論文就不會(huì)了,那是因?yàn)橥瑢W(xué)們沒有明白議論文中的記敘與記敘文中的記敘有什么不同,所以一寫起議論文中的記敘,還是按照記敘文的寫法寫作,這自然就不行了。那好,今天我們就從如何寫議論文中的記敘講起。
二、說學(xué)生本屆高一學(xué)生經(jīng)過了三年初中課改,在心理上,他們渴望表現(xiàn)的欲望和自主探究的欲望比較強(qiáng)烈,對有興趣的知識(shí)表現(xiàn)出高度地?zé)崆?,并具有一定的團(tuán)結(jié)協(xié)作能力,但還是應(yīng)該正視一個(gè)并不樂觀的現(xiàn)實(shí)——在寫作方面,學(xué)生知識(shí)還停留在簡單的記敘及表達(dá)方式綜合運(yùn)用上,至于巧妙構(gòu)思、謀篇布局很是空白。即便已經(jīng)經(jīng)過高中一個(gè)學(xué)期的學(xué)習(xí),但還是有大部分學(xué)生依然基礎(chǔ)較為薄弱,甚至出現(xiàn)不知從何下筆的現(xiàn)象。三、說教法與學(xué)法“老師搭臺(tái),學(xué)生唱戲”1、教法:本課將安排兩課時(shí)(一課時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)一課時(shí)練筆),采用 PPT 多媒體課件教學(xué),嘗試用角色扮演法、圖片展示法和多媒體教學(xué)等方法,教學(xué)中應(yīng)該重視學(xué)生的參與性和探究性。2、學(xué)法:學(xué)生應(yīng)該充分利用多角度創(chuàng)設(shè)的學(xué)習(xí)情境來激發(fā)自身學(xué)習(xí)的興趣和熱情,分組討論,小組互助等形式讓學(xué)生積極自主參與、進(jìn)行問題探究學(xué)習(xí)。理論依據(jù):建構(gòu)主義理論“學(xué)生是學(xué)習(xí)的中心”的闡釋,教師應(yīng)該做學(xué)生主動(dòng)建構(gòu)意義的幫助者、促進(jìn)者。
談到這,如果有人會(huì)說這僅僅是在于我個(gè)人與戰(zhàn)場之上,戰(zhàn)場之下另當(dāng)別論,那么,他完全錯(cuò)了。在我小學(xué)四年級(jí)的語文課上有兩個(gè)人發(fā)言積極,一個(gè)姓黃,一個(gè)姓康,黃同學(xué)發(fā)言比康同學(xué)更積極,班上的同學(xué)常以為黃同學(xué)是個(gè)了不得的人物,后來,教語文的吳老師曾悄悄地告訴我:班上真正厲害的是康x,那黃x沒什么,說的全是“一點(diǎn)通”上的,照搬不誤。說到這,我還得厚著臉皮自夸一下,在四年級(jí)時(shí),我和康同學(xué)是同坐,一次,老師叫我們對一片課文(好象是寫黃繼光舍身炸暗堡)的一個(gè)段落提問題時(shí),我悄悄地對康同學(xué)說了一個(gè)問題,康同學(xué)對我說:“你站起來說嘛?!眱?nèi)向的我遙遙頭,康同學(xué)便站舉手,并起來將我的問題大聲地說了出來,結(jié)果老師說:“恩,康x的問題提得很好?!?/p>
在學(xué)習(xí)語文經(jīng)驗(yàn)交流會(huì)上,季老師舉著我的《采花釀蜜集》,對大家說:“人日積月累辛勤采擷,終于釀出了知識(shí)的瓊漿。大家都應(yīng)這樣,爭做知識(shí)的富戶??!”老師有點(diǎn)激動(dòng),低低地爬在鼻梁上的眼鏡突然滑了下來,正好落在那集子上。大家笑了,季老師也笑了。就這樣,我的寫作有了進(jìn)步,好幾篇作文登上了班級(jí)《學(xué)作園地》。從此,我愛上了語文,更深深地愛上了季老師。高中升學(xué)考前那個(gè)星期天的夜晚,季老師舊病復(fù)發(fā),累倒了。半夜,老師們把他送進(jìn)了公社衛(wèi)生院。第二天,同學(xué)們都悄悄去衛(wèi)生院看望。我去的時(shí)候,季老師正在掛滴流??墒牵挛缂纠蠋熡殖霈F(xiàn)在講臺(tái)上,他臉色憔悴,聲音沙啞……我手捧《采花釀蜜集》走近季老師,思緒的溪水從遠(yuǎn)方流了回來。“季老師”,我把本子捧給老師,深情地叫了聲。季老師接過本子,仔細(xì)翻閱著,臉上露出了笑容,像是聞到了郁郁芳香的蜜汁似的?!斑M(jìn)步不小呀!”季老師說著,又在本子扉頁上題了
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【教材分析】本節(jié)課是高中英語第一冊的最后一個(gè)單元的閱讀和思考部分,文章難度明顯增加,體現(xiàn)在以下幾個(gè)方面:文章題材是說明文,比較難理解;話題生疏,涉及到歷史等知識(shí);生詞量增大,而且在語境中理解詞匯的要求提高。面對這些,教師的難度和高度也要有所提升,通過探討說明順序,了解背景知識(shí)等幫助他們找到說明文閱讀的方法?!窘虒W(xué)目標(biāo)與核心素養(yǎng)】1. 文化意識(shí)目標(biāo)新課程中指出,文化意識(shí)是對中外文化的理解和對優(yōu)秀文化的認(rèn)同。文化意識(shí)的的培養(yǎng)有助于學(xué)生增加國家認(rèn)同和家國情懷,成為有文明素養(yǎng)和社會(huì)責(zé)任感的人。我們這個(gè)單元很好體現(xiàn)了這一點(diǎn),通過了解漢字書寫的體系和發(fā)展,學(xué)生可以有一種文化自豪感,同時(shí)也能夠幫助學(xué)生深入挖掘這篇文章,從而想到更多和中國文化相關(guān)的方面。2. 學(xué)習(xí)能力目標(biāo)
choir memberspeople to run food stands people to sell festival ticketspeople to sell music CDspeople to set up equipmentmusical performersStep 2: Listen to the announcement again and answer the questions. ? 1. What kind of songs will Grace Davis sing at the festival?? 2. Who can try out as a performer?? 3. What can those who think they do not have musical talent do?? 4. How can students volunteer to take part?? Talking about preferences:? Would you prefer doing ..?? What would you prefer to do?? Would you rather do .... or ….?? What would you rather do?? I'd prefer .... to ..? I'd rather have ... than .. Step 3: Speaking ProjectWork in groups. Role-play the conversation or make a new one.? Debbie: Where have you been? You missed the announcement about the music festival.? John: I was at the doctor's office. Music festival?? Frank: Yes, it's going to be next month on the school sports field. John, you can play the piano. How about playing it at the festival?? John: Well, I'd rather play the violin. I can play Liang Zhu.? Frank: Wow! Sounds good. What about you, Debbie? ? Debbie: Actually, I don't have much musical ability. I'd prefer just to help out with the crowds.? Frank: You can sell tickets or work at a food stand.? John: So can I assume that the aim of the festival is to raise money?? Debbie: Yes. All of the money will go to charity.
Step1:自主探究。1.(教材P52)Born(bear) in the USA on 2 January 1970, Whitacre began studying music at the University of Nevada in 1988.2.(教材P52) Moved(move) by this music, he said, “It was like seeing color for the first time.”3.(教材P56)I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged(discourage).4.(教材P58)Encouraged(encourage) by this first performance and the positive reaction of the audience, I have continued to play the piano and enjoy it more every day.Step2:語法要點(diǎn)精析。用法1:過去分詞作表語1).過去分詞可放在連系動(dòng)詞be, get, feel, remain, seem, look, become等之后作表語,表示主語所處的狀態(tài)Tom was astonished to see a snake moving across the floor.湯姆很驚訝地看到一條蛇正爬過地板。Finally the baby felt tired of playing with those toys.終于嬰兒厭倦了玩那些玩具。注意:1).過去分詞作表語時(shí)與被動(dòng)語態(tài)的區(qū)別過去分詞作表語時(shí),強(qiáng)調(diào)主語所處的狀態(tài);而動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語態(tài)表示主語是動(dòng)作的承受者,強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)作。The library is now closed.(狀態(tài))圖書館現(xiàn)在關(guān)閉了。The cup was broken by my little sister yesterday.(動(dòng)作)昨天我妹妹把杯子打碎了。2)感覺類及物動(dòng)詞的現(xiàn)在分詞與過去分詞作表語的區(qū)別過去分詞作表語多表示人自身的感受或事物自身的狀態(tài),常譯作“感到……的”;現(xiàn)在分詞多表示事物具有的特性,常譯作“令人……的”。
This lesson is about music. Students can classify the types of music through the instruments and its sound and can talk about their preferences about music, even join some activities and play a role in them according to their musical talents. On the basis, they are guided to use the languages to express their preferences and some plosive sounds and their rules.1. Classify the music types through the instruments and its sound.2. Listen and understand what the speakers’ preferences are and the reasons; talk about their own preferences and give their own reasons, using these sentences: “What kind of music do you like? And why? “ “Because it makes/gives me energy/peaceful.../touches my heart...”.3. Learn some plosives and the rules.4. Join some activities and play a role in them according to the talents. 1. Listen and understand what the speakers’ preferences are and the reasons;2. talk about their own preferences and give their own reasons, using these sentences: “What kind of music do you like? And why? “ “Because it makes/gives me energy/peaceful.../touches my heart...”.3. Learn some plosives and incomplete plosives and its rules.Step 1 Lead inPoint at the pictures on P50 and ask Q1: What are the people doing in the pictures below?Q2: What kind of music they are?Then play the MP3s one by oneStep 2 ListeningTask 1: A reporter from the school newspaper is interviewing students about music. Listen to the interviews. Draw lines between the words to make complete sentences. Some words will not be used.
(4)Now we have heard a number of outstanding speeches ... 我們已經(jīng)聆聽了許多精彩的發(fā)言……(5)Because we wanted the nations of the world, working together, to deal with ... 因?yàn)槲覀兿M澜绺鲊鴪F(tuán)結(jié)起來去應(yīng)對……(6)And if we do not act ... 如果我們不采取行動(dòng)……(7)Now, I share the concerns that have been expressed ... 我也同意對于……表達(dá)的擔(dān)心(8)Let us show the world that by working together we can ... 讓我們告訴全世界,通過一起努力我們可以……(9)It is now time for us to ... 是時(shí)候我們……(10)And I have always wished that ... 我一直希望……(11)Thank you for letting me share this day with me.感謝你們和我共度這一天。實(shí)踐演練:假如你是高中生李華,你校將舉辦一次以“音樂”為主題的演講比賽,請你按照主題,寫下你的演講稿。注意:詞數(shù)100左右。First of all, thank you for listening to my speech. My topic is: love music like love yourself.Music is like the air we need to maintain our normal lives around us. You can't imagine how terrible a world without music would be. Movies and TV shows have no music, only dry conversations and scenes; mobile phones only vibrations; streets only noisy crowds; cafes, western restaurants only depressed meals. What a terrible world it is!As a student, I hope we all can enjoy the fun brought by music in our spare time. Instead of just listening to music, we can even make our own music. Let's enjoy the fun of music!Thanks again for your attention!
Step 3: Read to sum upRead it again and sum up the problems of the three students, and then write down the advice that was given from others.Step 4: Work in pairs. List your learning problems in English and brainstorm some useful advice.Useful expressions ? I don't know how to…... Is a big difficulty for me. I cannot ...? You might try …. It's very important to…? I have no idea how/what .My biggest problem is .... ? I (also) have trouble with. My advice is …. This worked for me.? l cannot understand the teachers’ English in class.Step 5 Homework:為提高我校學(xué)生的英語口語水平,我們將舉辦英語演講比賽(English- speaking contest),請你根據(jù)下面的信息,以學(xué)生會(huì)(the Students‘ Union)的名義寫一份海報(bào),歡迎全校同學(xué)參加,屆時(shí)特邀本校美籍教師史密斯先生頒獎(jiǎng)。? 報(bào)名時(shí)間 9月30日以前(報(bào)名:signup)? 報(bào)名地點(diǎn) 學(xué)生會(huì)辦公室? 比賽時(shí)間 10月9日晚7:00~9:00? 比賽地點(diǎn) 學(xué)校大會(huì)議室? 獎(jiǎng)勵(lì) 前8名
4. When he got absorbed in his world of music, he felt as if he could “see” the beauty of the world around him, like he had in his previous life.P·P as adverbial: _________________________________________________________________.Function: _______________________________________________________________________.Step 5 Solid Complete the passage with the words in brackets in their correct forms.Well known as a successful band, the Impact members show quite a few striking qualities. They never ever give up. When _____________(question) by the media, they are not _____________(discourage) and practise even harder. They are improving themselves by attending several master training class. They are united. _____________(fill with) team spirit, they act as a whole, always aiming for glory. Step 6 Difference and similarity from -ingObserve the following examples.1. He went out, shutting the door behind him.=He went out, ________________________________________________________.2. Not knowing what to do, he went to his parents for help.=__________________________________________, he went to his parents for help.Similarity: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Difference : _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Step Practice1. ________ in a hurry, this article was not so good. 因?yàn)閷懙么颐? 這篇文章不是很好。2. ________ carefully, he found something he hadn’t known before. 他仔細(xì)讀書時(shí), 發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些從前不知道的東西。3. ________ why he did it, the monitor said it was his duty. 當(dāng)被問及他為什么要這么做時(shí), 班長說這是他的職責(zé)
1. Get basic information about Eric; read deeply to understand the history and development of the virtual choir.2. Understand what the function of the virtual choir is and how to make a virtual choir.3. Understand the meaning of some languages in the context of the text through question guidance, such as “Many people do not have close friends or contacts who have the same interest in music.” and so on.Step 1 Leading-in1. Answer the following questions.Q1:Do you know the Apps like Tik Tok and Quick Hand?Q2: Do you want to make a Tik Tok video or a Quick Hand video?2. Play a Tik Tok video Step 2: Understanding the title Q1:What does the title mean ?Q2: Is the article a narration or exposition? Why? Q3: Can you change the title ? If you can, what is the title?Step 3: Scanning the whole text and getting the basic information1. Answer the following questions.Q1:Who came up with the idea for a virtual choir?Q2: Where did Eric studied the musical composition?Q3: What is his song?2. Find the main idea of each paragraph3. Deal with some new words.Step 4: Reading carefully to get detailed informationPara 1 How to make a virtual choir1. PreparationA. tools: a virtual camera; an Internet connectionB. hero/heroin: friends or some individuals who have the same interests2. Process
This section focuses on "learning about experiencing music Online". This virtual choir is a new form of music performance. Members from all over the world don't need to love to come to a place. Instead, they use the new technology to model the various parts and wonderful virtual harmony group of music in the family. Students need to understand the main meaning of each paragraph. Finding topic sentences is an important way to understand the general idea of a paragraph. After the topic sentence, it is usually the detail sentence that supports and explains the topic sentence. Some paragraphs have obvious subject sentences, for example, the first sentence of the second paragraph is the subject sentence of the paragraph, and the following sentenceStudents need to pay attention to the topic sentences and key sentences, and then pay attention to how the sentences after the meaning explain, explain and support the topic sentences or key sentences before.1.Guide students to learn about experiencing music online2.Guide students to scan and circle the information in the text.3.Guide students to find the numbers and dates to fill in the timeline.4.Guide students to learn more about music by completing the sentences with the correct forms of the words and phrases. And then make a mind map about the outline of the passage.1. Guide students to pay attention to reading strategies, such as prediction, self-questioning and scanning.2. Help students sort out the main meaning of each paragraph and understand the narrative characteristics of "timeline” in illustrative style.3. Lead students to understand the changes that have been caused by the Internet.
The Internet celebrity Gao Yifeng. Years ago, he owned 5 companies and the staffs over 1,000, but during the economy crisis, he became nothing but debt. He was so worried that his hair became white overnight. There was a time when he wanted to killed himself. But after listening to the song Start Over by Liu Huan, he decided to cheer himself up. He started a steamed bun shop and gradually became a national chain shops. Now he became successful again.Walter Haddon said, “Music is the medicine of a troubled mind.” Music contains such a pleasant and inspiring force. Music gave him courage and bravery. When he listened to the song, it made his spirit fly like a kite in the wind. Music gave him strength and brought him relief. It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times. I hope none of us have to go through the same kind of suffering that he did. At the same time, we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone. During those times, music can help us in the same way that it helped him. I hope we all will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of our life. Thank you for your listening !5.Revise your writing each other.Does he/she explain how music has changed his/her/someone else’s life?Are some of the rhetorical devices included and used properly ?Does he/she talk about how music makes him/her/someone feel?Is the first word in each sentences capitalised?Does he/she use correct punctuation ?